So, it’s not pretty. . .and it’s a little rough. But I’m proud of my youngest spawn. He wrote these poems and added pictures, then shared them with his class.
Because I own braggin’ rights, I’m sharing with you.
Winter Snow
The Winter snow trudges and stumbles along,
Dragging with it the Winter breeze.
He lets enough loose to make a nice little breeze,
But sometimes his mittened hand slips and the bag is dropped,
Sending huge winds across the land.
He picks it up as soon as it fell,
And stumbles and trudges to another land.
Comic Heroes
Cool heroes.
On time bad-guy fighting people.
Mystifying secrets.
Instrumental weapons.
Colorful suits.
Heroic personalities.
Extraordinary powers.
Readily on guard.
Overseeing eyes.
Extreme risks and dares.
Super good heroes.
This is just great! I love seeing how children create through their own worlds. Awesome job!
Great stuff! Love a young mind. WTG buddy 🙂
Very nice! I like the poem a lot!
Methinks he inherited his mother's talent. Great job!
THERE, is going to be one heartbreaker when he grows up! He'll win the girls with words. I love the superhero one 🙂
OMG! Those are inspired! So simple and real. You have a little poet! Love them!
LOVE IT. Off to tweet this. It's jewel.
Children will always surprise you–and what a surprise! These are wonderful, Sheri. I love the Winter Snow one–I could see the personification of Old Man Winter trudging across the Plains states. He's got his mother's way with words for sure!
Holy doodle, Trav! These are flippin' fantastic. And I love the pics, lol. You are seriously one talented dude!
Hey, here's my attempt.
The ants go marching two by two, ha ra, ha ra.
The ants go marching two by two, ha ra, ha ra.
The aunts go marching two by two, the little ones stop to take a…lol, now you fill in the last word. Hint, it rhymes with two.
It's in the GENES! Wonderful that you have a writer coming along. Tony and I are both writers and we have four spawns and the only one who showed ability, has another career. Way to go little guy!
Bad guy fighting people! That is awesome!
Oh how neat he's showing a love for words. Two artists under one roof! 🙂
Dana
Love it…and love the pictures that go along with it.
Fantastic, Sheri. He's got some real talent! Congratulations to you, Mom!
Awww LOVE it!! Your boys are so talented (just like mama)! Can't wait to see what they will become!
Ha, that's so flipping cool! He's getting his creativity from his mama. 🙂