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It’s not easy to write a scene that
captures your reader’s imagination. To hold them in a grip so
tight . . . they go up in flames.
captures your reader’s imagination. To hold them in a grip so
tight . . . they go up in flames.
Sizzling heat. Clenched teeth.
Desire beyond reason…or rationale.
Desire beyond reason…or rationale.
It doesn’t have to be graphic.
Tension
can increase the pounding of our blood.
can increase the pounding of our blood.
Lead us to the moment.
Keep us hanging
by a thread.
by a thread.
Here’s a scene that pulls the tension tight.
REMEDY MAKER
Her
soft skin called to him in whispered undertones aided by his memory. Earthy
scents wafted up to tease his nose and his nibbling lips found the erotic spot
just below her ear.
soft skin called to him in whispered undertones aided by his memory. Earthy
scents wafted up to tease his nose and his nibbling lips found the erotic spot
just below her ear.
“Smells
good too,” he murmured, his lips traveling the juncture between her shoulder
and neck. Tattoo-like markings stood contrary to her coloring. He held his
breath, waiting for the expected sense of war-inflicted hatred to erupt.
Instead, a pressure bloomed in his chest, his heart swelling. Unfamiliar with
the new chemistry mixing in his body, he sat back and absorbed the sensation,
content to just be for once.
good too,” he murmured, his lips traveling the juncture between her shoulder
and neck. Tattoo-like markings stood contrary to her coloring. He held his
breath, waiting for the expected sense of war-inflicted hatred to erupt.
Instead, a pressure bloomed in his chest, his heart swelling. Unfamiliar with
the new chemistry mixing in his body, he sat back and absorbed the sensation,
content to just be for once.
While
she chatted about Pan knows what, Rhy
ate without tasting his food, mesmerized by the movement of her erotic mouth.
Her lips and tongue moved in perfect synchronicity, dancing in and out over her
teeth.
she chatted about Pan knows what, Rhy
ate without tasting his food, mesmerized by the movement of her erotic mouth.
Her lips and tongue moved in perfect synchronicity, dancing in and out over her
teeth.
Oh. My. Gods.
A
vortex of insanity threatened to reach up and pull him in. Incredibly, his
arousal inflated to raise a tented gable in his shorts. Never in his life had
he wanted a female more. One night with Patience, one week, a whole
lifetime—and it would never be enough.
vortex of insanity threatened to reach up and pull him in. Incredibly, his
arousal inflated to raise a tented gable in his shorts. Never in his life had
he wanted a female more. One night with Patience, one week, a whole
lifetime—and it would never be enough.
Her
nipples were hard under her borrowed shirt that read Blood
‘n Guts. Without realizing what he was doing, he stacked his mug on top of
his empty plate, and moved to stand next to Patience.
nipples were hard under her borrowed shirt that read Blood
‘n Guts. Without realizing what he was doing, he stacked his mug on top of
his empty plate, and moved to stand next to Patience.
“Wazzup?” Then her eyes drifted down. “Oh
. . . my.”
. . . my.”
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I love that scene…oh…my is right! From Branded…hasn't found a home yet. JJ and Shayla again, picking up where I left off last week… She kicked off her boots and turned to him with a smile. The only light in the room came from where hall light shone under the door. Keeping her eyes on his, she unsnapped her jeans and slid them past her hips and feet. With a little wiggle, she shoved them aside with her toe. Hooking her thumbs in her thong panties, she slipped them down, bending to step out of them. “You’re killing me,” JJ… Read more »
D'Ann – now that's SMOKIN'! I especially like the teasing heat of your last two sentences. Excellent! Thank you so much for playing today.
Whew! Gettin' hot up in hera! Those are making me squirmy! In honor of the 4.5 Star review I got today from Long and Short Reveiws – Here is my sexy snippet from One Knight in Brooklyn! His chest glistened in the soft glow of the lantern. He embodied her every desire. Robert kicked off his pants and boxers and slid her panties to her knees, trailing kisses down the middle of her chest and stomach. Her breath hitched in her throat, and she shuddered at the smooth satin of his lips. She shimmied out of the bikini briefs. The… Read more »
When you came out with One Knight in Brooklyn, I couldn't WAIT to read it. Such a fun story. Congratulations on the excellent reviews and top ratings. And thank you for sharing your steam here today!
This is my 1st time here, so I hope I do this right. This is from Obsession She looked up and there he stood with a bottle of wine in his hand. “I see you received the flowers.” “Thank you,” she replied as she walked slowly toward him. You could almost feel the electricity in the air between them, they were like two ends of a magnet searching for the connection they desperately needed. Hudson placed his briefcase and the bottle of wine on the table. She was finally in his arms and their lips met. Alex squealed as Hudson… Read more »
Loved this line: You could almost feel the electricity in the air between them, they were like two ends of a magnet searching for the connection they desperately needed.
Thanks for sharing your excerpt (whew!). Loved hearing your online interview today, btw. Great job!!
From Afterburn by Sonia Hightower, available on Amazon, ARe, 1Place, etc. Crystal waited what seemed like hours, her legs shaking as she stood there against the wall, her pussy dripping with wetness, her nipples perked so hard they hurt. In reality, it was a mere minutes before Grant came back with a condom slipped onto his shaft. He hadn't bothered to remove the suit. Crystal was aroused even more by this. He came up to her, pressing her against the wall. His hands cupped her buttocks and lifted her almost effortlessly. Their mouths mated before he trailed his tongue down… Read more »
It seems early, but I'm already turning on the fan.
Tara! That scene rocks! You give just enough info to engage the reader's imagination – and let them fly from there. Thank you for sharing from AFTERBURN.
First of all, I love the new pic at the top Sheri, it's really my kind of image…Hee-he. Secondly, I hope the flames are ready for this? It is all out and fiercely edgy. From my about to be released novel… More Sex. This is a scene from a BDSM story…Warning explicit. Shaking fiercely, she watched him unzipping his leather pants. “I am going to say I’m sorry first—-Rober,”Jewel whispered with a little fear in her quavering voice. Her body remained in place with her bent over offering, though every muscle she had was tense and expectant. Chuckling, he reached… Read more »
Hehehe, you like that pic, Leanore? Yeah, so did I. What I bet everyone likes is your darkly seductive selection here. This is some smoking hot stuff! I haven't seen you around much, and now I know why. Your writing cave must be a sauna after finishing MORE SEX. Congratulations on yet another book! Yee-haw!
Thank you Sheri. It has been some intense days at the keyboard for me. Some of these stories will make you squirm and other will make you laugh. Almost there, then it goes to my best editor! Maybe I should have posted the sexy tense scene just before this one that led up to the kinky sex. Chuckle… I read todays line up here and they are hot and intriguing, I say a HOT bravo to all the authors.
Oohhh! Is it hot in here or what? Great excerpts! From Her Unlikely Bodyguard, releasing June 15th through BP. Jemma Leigh returned to her research and left the men in the kitchen. A short while later, she heard careful footfalls as Ted made his way up the stairs to join her. "You finished with guard duty for now?""Could be that I came up here to do some hands-on bodyguard work.""Oooh, I'm liking the sound of that, Teddy Bear." She loved it when they bantered back and forth like this, sexual innuendos abounding."And I'm becoming addicted to your charms, Jemma Love.""Addicted… Read more »
This is one of those teasers that leaves me with questions. Who are they? How'd they get to this point. What happens after this? June 15th can't come soon enough. Congratulations on your upcoming release with Breathless Press.
A bodyguard. I love it. Thank you for coming by!
Oh my…another sizzling hot Friday Flames!
Did you bring the iced tea, Brendan? It's getting HOT in here!