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Sizzling heat. Clenched teeth. Desire
beyond reason…or rationale.
It’s not easy to write a scene that
captures your reader’s imagination and attention. To hold them in a grip so
tight...they go up in flames.
It doesn’t have to be graphic, tension
can increase the pounding of our blood. Lead us to the moment, keep us hanging
by a thread.
To
start it off, here’s a snippet from my upcoming release.
start it off, here’s a snippet from my upcoming release.
Remedy Maker
Under the blankets, Patience turned toward him. “Good morning,
Remedy Maker. Wazzup?”
Remedy Maker. Wazzup?”
Rhy chuckled deep in his throat. “I’ll show you.”
He guided her slim hand down to his
jutting erection, and taught her how to wrap her fingers around him. A few
tentative, unsure strokes later, and his eyes rolled back with pleasure.
Uncontrollable urges to thrust into her palm pushed his hips forward.
jutting erection, and taught her how to wrap her fingers around him. A few
tentative, unsure strokes later, and his eyes rolled back with pleasure.
Uncontrollable urges to thrust into her palm pushed his hips forward.
Okay people! I showed you mine – now
it’s your turn to show me yours. Don’t forget to leave your book title and a link so
interested parties can rush out and buy a copy
🙂
it’s your turn to show me yours. Don’t forget to leave your book title and a link so
interested parties can rush out and buy a copy
🙂
Whew! Nice! Mine is from Branded. It is the anti-heroine and her one night stand, JJ. He was a little more gentle than she’d been when he pulled open the buttons on her western shirt, exposing her breasts, swollen above the lace demi-bra she’d worn. As he dipped his head to gently nibble on one mound she thought she might faint from the pressure building in her belly. She shrugged out of her shirt, letting it sink to the floor, unnoticed. With fingers that didn’t want to work, she undid the front clasp of her bra and smirked when he… Read more »
D'Ann – You know how much I love your story Branded. Great scene! Bring on the squeaky bed!
Thanks so much for the opportunity, Sheri! That was HOT! Remedy Maker is going to sizzle off the e-reader! I'm posting a scene from my current WIP that I'm querying right now, As Long As You're Mine: “Raif! You have to wake up, darling. Come here,” she whispered, though the covers would have dampened any sound to the outside. At last she succeeded in rousing him enough for him to turn toward her. Then he relapsed back into slumber, the gentle snore substantially louder. “Raif!” Had he drunk too much after dinner? A large rough hand clamped down on her… Read more »
How fun! I loved that scene. Really left me wondering if Raif knew what he was doing or not.
I know you're marketing your book "Almost Perfect" for a good cause right now. Here's where readers can learn more: http://jennajaxon.wordpress.com
*fans self* ummm….wow! Great scenes so far!!
I love all those flaming scenes! It's just like Ellen Degeneres says, "That hot heat is something." LOL Here is mine from my first published story Pinocchio Syndrome: Splaying her with his hand, he exposed her clit. With the tip of his tongue, he flicked it, teased it and lapped it, circling before drawing it into his mouth. Her chest heaved. A lurid moan escaped her throat. He smiled against her flesh. "Ohh yeah, princess. We're just getting started here. You betta save some of that." She tasted like the most exotic Greek olives, salty with a hint of bitterness.… Read more »
Orville Reden-bop-her!! LOL!!! That's great. Thanks for sharing this.
Love the scenes ladies!
Sheri…yours was HAWT with a hint of humor…loved it…D'Ann great description and Jenna…just plain HOT! WHEW
Thank you for stopping by, Christine! Best of luck on your book tour.
*Giggles* Niiiiice. If I write erotica, I'll have to conjure up a pen name. I'll need some critter help there! 😛
That brings up a good question: Why isn't there any sweet romance or even YA here? Steam can be in the tension leading up to a closed-door scene. I wonder if I can get any takers…
Thanks for stopping by Sydney!
Hmm? I've got that! Let me drum up some sugar for you! 🙂
Now THAT's what I'm talking about! It's hard to build tension into a scene that only takes place in the reader's mind.
This is from Agent in Training. “Does your offer still stand?” Her question drew his attention back to her.“What's that?”“The one you made at the hospital.” Her eyes reminded him of a rain-soaked forest. She chewed on her bottom lip.“Could you refresh my memory? I was drugged. It's a little hazy.”“You offered your services. What do you think? Are you up for it?”Nick's reserve crumbled. She was asking him to make love to her, and frankly he'd be a fool to turn her down. “I'm getting there, just give me a second. To hell with company policy or common sense… Read more »
Jerri – You're so busy these days, thank you very much for stopping by. Love that last line.
http://www.amazon.com/Training-Department-National-Security-ebook/dp/B007ZE2GMO/ref=sr_1_2?ie=UTF8&qid=1337373868&sr=8-2
Here is a little excerpt from my novel, Check Out Time, which will be released on June 13 by Oaklight Publishing: ## As she turned, she pulled the blankets up to her chin. Her jaw dropped. She caught sight of a pair of brilliant blue eyes. She took in the soft features and the neatly trimmed goatee. Her nervous stare traveled to the blond bangs, and then back to the eyes again. She tried not to notice the bare chest and the wisps of light blond hair against naked skin, but it was difficult. “Good morning,” Richard said. “I’ve been… Read more »
Hehehe – teaser. Best wishes on your book tour, and many thanks for sharing today!
Thank you, Sheri!
From Sinful Urges by Sonia Hightower. Available on ARe, Bookstand, Smashwords, Amazon, 1Place. "She did a hip-swinging twirl and, facing me once again, she unbuttoned the second button. I unzipped my pants. There were no more buttons after this. Her short top fell open, revealing two magnificent breasts, just right for a man's hands. I watched her place her palms on her still rotating hips. Though I was too far away, I could swear I saw a trickle of sweat run down the concave between her breasts and into her belly button. I watched it and freed myself from my… Read more »
What? He's a peeping Tom? LOL! Wish I knew what Maria was listening to – lol. Great scene, thanks for sharing.
Wow, wow, wow! I love all the scenes. Al of them are smoking hot!
Brendan!! (Love's Prophecy – Available in ebook and print from Amazon). So glad you stopped by today!!
Wow, those were some steamy scenes!
Well, I suppose I'll bite.. Don't laugh at me. 🙂 It's definitely not very steamy. He rolled his eyes and snorted. “I haven’t done so well with the task it seems.” “Oh, aye, truly you have!” She beamed a radiant smile at him. He stared at her as she placated him with her smile and reassurances. No longer able to resist her proximity, he peered from her vibrant green eyes and that glorious sunny smile of hers. Then he reacted. He reached out and hooked his arm around her curved waist and pulled her soft body to rest against his.… Read more »
Wow, these are great! Okay, I'll try – from a contemp piece I've been playing with called The Wicked Night – Tristan grabbed a grape and poised it at her mouth, begging her lips to open. She stared at him, parting them and sucking in the offered fruit. He fed her another and this time, her tongue licked his fingers before stealing the grape. His eyes turned darker and he groaned. With a smile, she held the grape in her mouth, rose and scooted to him, to kiss him. He met her lips and pried them open. His tongue darted… Read more »
This is a chapter from my second unfinished)novel called 'Repercussions. Katie first approached Gilbert, kissing him sumptuously, simultaneously undoing his shirt buttons. As soon as he had got the idea, he started to peel off his clothes, only to be stopped in his tracks by Katie.‘No, no,’ she chided him. ‘I’ll do that in a minute. Just wait.’Then moving to her second “victim”, she started to undress him, slowly, sensuously, like a tiger playing with its prey, only returning to Gilbert when Antoine was down to just his pants, showing, very obviously, that he had enjoyed the experience. Gilbert was… Read more »
From my PNR WIP, Madison's Stone: He raised her up enough to slide her jeans and panties over her butt and hips, then gently sat her back down so he could peel the material down her legs. The feel of her bare flesh against the backs of his fingers warmed his belly. Damien let his gaze wander over the sleek lines and curves of her naked body, an approving growl rumbling from his chest when he finally looked into her eyes. Curiosity flickered in those lightened orbs. Unspoken want flashed across her face. He crawled over her, his body barely… Read more »
Here is a scene from a story i had published aby Burnt Bridge. The link is:http://burntbridge.net/2012/04/21/gods-naked-will-by-c-d-mitchell/CD Mitchell “But you’re a preacher’s daughter,” he said. “You’re a preacher. So what? Have you ever done it?”Nancyworked at her buttons. Mooney sat and watched. After removing her blouse, she turned her back to him and lifted her hair. “Unhook my bra,” she said. Mooney reached and fumbled with the clasp. Then he tried with both hands. Nancylooked at him over her shoulder. “Don’t you know how to unhook a bra?” She dropped her hair and reached the clasp with her right hand. The… Read more »
Hi Sheri! Thanks for allowing us to do this! What fun! My excerpt is from my recent paranormal romance debut, For the Love of a God. http://www.amazon.com/For-The-Love-God-ebook/dp/B007WZHRNO/ref=la_B007X5P4I8_1_1?ie=UTF8&qid=1337730947&sr=1-1 He reached around for her zipper again to drag it south, but only got about another half inch down before he noticed her face. She tried to hide her look of uncertainty from him, but failed miserably. “Maia, what’s wrong? If you don’t you want to do this…” “I do.” She opened and closed her mouth a few times, feeling so inadequate before his golden, manly beauty. “It’s just— Oh God, here comes… Read more »