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Sizzling heat. Clenched teeth. Desire beyond reason…or rationale.
It’s not easy to write a
scene that captures your reader’s imagination and attention. To hold
them in a grip so tight…they go up in flames.
Today, I want you to share your
Smoking Hot scene, the one that sends the reader…up in flames.
Smoking Hot scene, the one that sends the reader…up in flames.
It
doesn’t have to be graphic, tension can increase the pounding of our
blood. Lead us to the moment, keep us hanging by a thread.
doesn’t have to be graphic, tension can increase the pounding of our
blood. Lead us to the moment, keep us hanging by a thread.
To
start it off, here’s a snippet from my upcoming
release.
start it off, here’s a snippet from my upcoming
release.
Portals of Oz
“Jack,” she moaned.
“Say my name again.” Pleasure like no
other washed over at the sound of his name on her lips. His hand brushed her
heated core, and he hummed his appreciation. “You don’t wear underwear?” A
wolfish grin pulled his lips. “You’re so smooth and wet.”
other washed over at the sound of his name on her lips. His hand brushed her
heated core, and he hummed his appreciation. “You don’t wear underwear?” A
wolfish grin pulled his lips. “You’re so smooth and wet.”
“I’ve never liked … they’re … I don’t
grow hair ….” She couldn’t form a complete sentence as he flicked his teasing
fingertips.
grow hair ….” She couldn’t form a complete sentence as he flicked his teasing
fingertips.
“You don’t like panties, and you don’t
have hair here?” he helpfully supplied for her. He slid lower down her body,
taking a pert nipple into his mouth, drawing on it deeply. The taste of orange
blossom honey burst in his mouth, and he groaned the delicious taste of her.
have hair here?” he helpfully supplied for her. He slid lower down her body,
taking a pert nipple into his mouth, drawing on it deeply. The taste of orange
blossom honey burst in his mouth, and he groaned the delicious taste of her.
He swirled his finger around her little
nub without direct contact. Her hips searched to increase her pleasure,
writhing and moaning her need. The succulence seeping from her body was laden
with pheromones and musk. Jack inhaled the heat of her. It tempered his cock
into steel, and made his head spin.
nub without direct contact. Her hips searched to increase her pleasure,
writhing and moaning her need. The succulence seeping from her body was laden
with pheromones and musk. Jack inhaled the heat of her. It tempered his cock
into steel, and made his head spin.
Excited, hot, her body readied itself
for him.
for him.
Okay
people! I showed you mine – now it’s your turn to show me yours. Don’t forget to leave
your book title so interested parties can rush out and buy a copy 🙂
people! I showed you mine – now it’s your turn to show me yours. Don’t forget to leave
your book title so interested parties can rush out and buy a copy 🙂
Hot teaser! Here's mine from Ravished Before Sunrise. 🙂 A wicked grin spread across his face and he grabbed her ankles and pulled her to the edge of the bed. She gasped at the sudden rush of adrenaline. Her vampire knelt between her legs and nipped at her right ankle. The tickling touch of his teeth and lips moved up her calf to her inner thigh. He lifted his head and met her stare with glowing eyes and smiled with gleaming fangs. Ema’s heart pounded in her ears and a seductive voice within taunted her to take him. His energy… Read more »
Hot-Hot-Hot! Love the fangs 🙂 Thanks for sharing, Lia!!
Here is a tease from Volume Two: Alphabetical Assignation – from my Summer's Journey series. (Volume One: Losing Control is FREE on Amazon today and Saturday – 5/4/12 – 5/5-12 incidentally.) Keeping me totally guessing, Mark now slid one long finger deep inside my wet pussy as his tongue once again gently explored my labia and teased my clit. He lightly flicked his tongue across my swollen button as another finger joined the first and alternated between slow deep thrusting and searching for the quite elusive g-spot on my upper vaginal wall. I moaned loudly and lustily now, not caring… Read more »
Summer – I'm heading over to download your book right away. Whew! Thank you for sharing and steaming the screen.
Whew! Hot, hot, hot! Gonna get all three books! Thanks for sharing, ladies!
I need some iced tea…
Here's a clip from "Fairy Tail" – Available on Amazon Thrusting her porcelain ass at me, which looked as if it could crush steel with the slightest clench of her cheeks, she sighed. “Do you like what you see?” “Are you serious?” I replied, my eyes devouring every inch of a body I’d willingly chew my own arms off for.“Not that I’m complaining, but fairy men are either incredibly stupid, or blind.”Holding out her hands to me, she smiled and said, “Oh no, they’re not blind. And they’re definitely not stupid. I suppose it explains why I shouldn’t be here.”I… Read more »
My husband applauded your snippet. He'd like to see more of what you write. Thank you, Andrew!!
These are smokin'! Here's a teaser from Wicked Allure, available on Amazon: Exquisite sensation stimulated her entire body at the contact and she braced herself on her knees, moving rhythmically against his swiping tongue. Like a dancer, she lost herself to the internal beat of her body. He sucked her little bud and a scream caught in her throat, her body jerking, her nipples hard and hurting. Her breath coming in short pants, Madigan wiggled faster against Zach’s mouth, enthralled and inflamed by the sight of his mouth devouring her wet flesh. Noticing that she watched him, he pushed her… Read more »
Awesome snippet! Loved your last paragraph, great way to end. Thank you for stopping by.
Fanning the Flames of desire – Our own lovely Sheri! Thanks for the opportunity! These are very hot. Here is mine from The Implanting, my new upcoming release! She stared into his unguarded eyes, and without hesitation climbed astride him, resting her knees on the rock at either side of his thighs. Tilting his head up, she lightly kissed his lips, running her fingers through his wet hair. You feel like heaven. She drew in the sweet flesh of his bottom lip. He softly growled. Waves of want washed over her. Trailing his hands up her sides, under her arms,… Read more »
And realize her desire she would! Whew Kary. Steam is beading on my laptop's screen now! The Implanting – I'll be looking for this!!
Here's a continuation of my WiP Demon Mine: Tortured breathing sounded through the room, hitting her ears. She realized it was coming from the both of them and then he was shouting as he released within her filling her with his seed. His cry muffled against her skin as his cock shot threads of his thick cream into her tight recesses. Her legs wrapped tight about him, holding him snuggly to her as her hands ran soothingly up and down his back. It was almost too much, too much pleasure and need, her orgasm having left her overly sensitive. She… Read more »
Nikki, Nikki, Nikki. You erotic writer you! Well done.
Hot excerpts here!! *fans self* Thanks, Sheri for offering your blog to share excerpts! Here's one from my debut story, Celestial Seduction, which was published almost a year ago. Carrie’s body tensed further as he brought her closer to orgasm. The foreplay started with some reluctance; she suspected sex was simply about breeding on his home planet. He learned fast though and she hadn’t been afraid to teach him. His body screamed sexual god. She took it as her responsibility to show him what it could do. Sex with an alien never entered her mind before, but she’d never imagined… Read more »
His tongue is as elongated as the rest of him? I LIKE! I want to let everyone know that Jessica is on a book tour right now. Look for her on Facebook and follow her around. It's a study of great writing.
Whew! I just turned on my fan! These are definitely up in flames today! Mine is from Almost Perfect, Read For A Cure Book for May from Decadent Publishing: Dazed with desire, she leaned back as he untied his pants. In another liquid movement, he slid them over slim hips so his engorged cock sprang free. She watched it bob before her and her ache doubled. “Stand up a second.” When she did, he sat down and turning her around, drew her onto his lap, her back pressed against his chest. He wrapped his arms around her, beginning to explore.… Read more »
I can't think of a better reason to buy a steamy HOT romance than to contribute to find a cure. Buy your copy today! Thank you for sharing today, Jenna Jaxon!
The whole place is flaiming.
I'm so hot…
All I can say is HOLY HOTNESS, BATMAN!!!!
LOL, Brendan! Can you believe the heat level here today?
Whooeee. Hot stuff, ladies. This is from The Cowboy's Baby. Probably what I might query next. It's a little long… He kissed her. This time it wasn’t slow and easy. His tongue ravaged hers. Tasting, teasing. Pulling away, rushing back. Like a starving man he devoured her mouth. And she kissed him back just as eagerly. She couldn’t get enough of him. She cupped his face with her hands, the slight stubble on his jaw grazing her palms. He tugged at the edge of her sweater and she reached between them to undo the clasp on her belt. It fell… Read more »
You have tension, both sexual and otherwise. Query this out, D'Ann. I love it. You've kept it so real, incorporating things not normally mentioned in imperfections of the body. *applause*
Have to say I loved every entry! HOT!!!!
Nikki
ROFL – You're STILL here, Nikki! I love it…
LMAO of course…and I came back again 🙂
You're priceless 🙂
I always swallow really heavy when I read this particular one.(chuckle)FROM BEASTS~ King Of Vengeance “Say it, Rose.” His fingers rested inside of her as he passed his warm palm over a tingling nipple.Valentine’s body jerked as the glorious finger propulsion halted and she shook her head while she gazed at his reflection in the mirror.“Tell me,” he purred to her ear.A living need for anything and everything he might wish do to her became like a tender aching inside of her. “Make me…” She licked her lips as she stared at his hand resting on her clit in the… Read more »
There's a reason you're known as Wicked Leanore! You write the most wickedly awesome scenes. As usual with your snippets, the iced tea didn't do the trick. I'm sipping a gin & tonic now. lol
Hee-hee, thank you Flamin' Sheri! The Beasts were my Erotic Epiphany and I was typing so fast I went through almost a keyboard each book! Frinds teased me about smoking keyboards at the time.
The other excerpts here, are making me look into my own liquor cabinet. WHEW!
I can only imagine the condition of your keyboards by the end. They should be enshrined somewhere behind glass. I'm thinking the Smithsonian…
My, oh, my, babes…there are some smokin' hot scenes here! *opens the window and fans self* Here's my contribution from my debut novella, MAROONED IN MIAMI: Stephanie’s heart raced as she tilted her head toward his lips. Her fingers stroked the back of his neck and raked through the ends of his hair. Now that all doubt melted away, she felt the heat from the desire that grew between her legs evidenced by the dampness in her panties. Jason slowly unbuttoned her blouse and slipped it off her shoulders. His fingers traveled downward and stopped in the valley between her… Read more »
You're thanking ME? No, no, no. I need to be thanking YOU! You've been added to my TBR list, and I bet I'm not the only one adding you either! Thank you for stopping by. (whew!)
That was fantastic! Whew! Loved the excerpt!
Thank you for coming by, Krystal! I've been loving ALL the wonderful excerpts.