Sizzling heat. Clenched teeth. Desire beyond reason…or rationale.
It’s not easy to write a scene that captures your reader’s imagination and attention. To hold them in a grip so tight…they go up in flames.
Today, I want you to share your
Smoking Hot scene, the one that sends the reader…up in flames.
Smoking Hot scene, the one that sends the reader…up in flames.
It doesn’t have to be graphic, tension can increase the pounding of our blood. Lead us to the moment, keep us hanging by a thread.
To
start it off, here’s an unedited portion from my upcoming
release.
start it off, here’s an unedited portion from my upcoming
release.
REMEDY MAKER
“I feel so… hot inside.” She managed to rasp out.
“Gamóto, woman. Don’t say shit like that.” No sooner
had the threat left his mouth, when his slick fingers breached her folds and
entered the slippery realm.
had the threat left his mouth, when his slick fingers breached her folds and
entered the slippery realm.
Euphoria of him fondling the one place she needed it
most drove her hips to wriggle and throat to moan. He leaned back to shove up her
t-shirt in a wadded mass above her breasts. Arousal and cool morning air tightened
her nipples. She welcomed his crushing weight, feeling secure and safe beneath
him.
most drove her hips to wriggle and throat to moan. He leaned back to shove up her
t-shirt in a wadded mass above her breasts. Arousal and cool morning air tightened
her nipples. She welcomed his crushing weight, feeling secure and safe beneath
him.
Rhycious’ eyes locked on his latest discovery, his mouth hung
slack. “My gods, Patience. You’re so—”
slack. “My gods, Patience. You’re so—”
His words broke off and his mouth
came crashing down on her breast. His warm lips took a distended point deep into his
mouth. The heat and sucking motion moved in time to the fingers pushing insistently
between her legs. Thighs spread wide by his big body, he had total access to
her. She almost cried from the want of him.
Okay people! I showed you mine – now it’s your turn. Don’t forget to leave your book title so interested parties can rush out and buy it 🙂
This is taken from my debut novel, Love's Prophecy. Sorry my sample is so long. With a tug, Breeana pulled her borrowed T-shirt over her head and smoothed her hands up her sides, and then cupped her breasts. Her thumbs flicked her nipples until they hardened. Mel's burning gaze was riveted on her breasts. Drunk with sexual power, she ran her palm over her stomach, then touched herself between her thighs. He growled, low and throaty, and his fangs slipped into view. He pushed his erection against her bottom as his eyes, completely black now, narrowed. His breath wheezed in… Read more »
*takes a sip of diet Dr. Pepper*
Whoo-wee! That's a fantastic scene, Brenda. Thank you so much for sharing a portion of your latest release on Friday Flames! Wow!
This is the first EVER sneak peek from "Revelations Out Of Darkness" Kaliska gently pushed him back on the bed and then climbed up on top of him. She took his big hands and placed them on her thighs. She pulled his hand up her thighs onto her tiny waist. She continued to direct him and lead his hands up to her small breasts. Once she had used his hands to tease her dark nipples erect she led them up to her face where she nuzzled them and placed gentle kisses on his palms. She moved the hands back into… Read more »
This certainly leaves me wanting to know more! Is her tongue magical? Does her saliva have healing agents? Perfect snippet that left me hanging!! Best wishes on this book, Rob. Thanks for coming by!!
This excerpt is from A STRANGER'S KISS by Roxy Boroughs, part of the Bandit Creek Books series… Slowly, carefully, he followed her back down to the mattress. But Amy felt like a stick figure, her limbs rigid and unyielding. It took Sam another ten minutes of kissing and caressing to get her to open for him. He settled his elbows between her thighs, his hands snaking around to cup her bottom. The first touch of his mouth on her flesh was like a jolt of lightening. Hot, wet, electric. His tongue carved a line down her folds, each stroke making… Read more »
A Stranger's Kiss by Roxy Boroughs is available through Amazon as an ebook.
You use great metaphors that added to my imagination. Nice excerpt, thanks for sharing!!
Whew. It's getting hot up in here.
I'll turn the fan up two notches to high for you! lol
Great job! Mine, from an old ms called A Real Bad Burn, in the hero Kelly's POV: For a few minutes he drove in silence, and as if the old Ford had a mind of its own, it turned toward the high school. Behind the gym, he parked and turned on the radio. How many times had they made out back here? Too many to count. Tired, both body and soul, he leaned his head back and closed his eyes. “So talk.” Instead of an answer, she got out and came around to his side of the truck and opened… Read more »
Talk about torturing your characters!! This is a book that needs to be published. Go forth and submit, D'Ann. And I say that not only as your crit partner, but as your friend. (plus, I'll make you a bet…)
This excerpt is from my Antholoy-Submit to Your Fantasies- The Domme I Asked for….. “Welcome.” A throaty, raspy woman’s voice rang in his ear, making his cock go from half-staff to full-on salute. He began to turn to face her when she abruptly jerked him forward. The sudden movement shocked him. “No turning around, Benjamin.” She patted his ass and worked her moist tongue on his ears, nipping the lobes with her teeth. So, Sophia was hiding a naughty side to her? A chortle escaped his lips as he asked, “Damn, the shy ones are always the sex kittens, aren’t… Read more »
Oooh, annonymous. You need to leave your naughty name. But I'll find you on Amazon…yes, I will.
Thank you for posting your STEAMY scene.
Lynn Myshe' Joseph is the author's name. :-}
Lea Ellen {night owl in IL}
Hey All… Mine is from my newest release Crossfire of Love… Lorenzo placed both of his hands on the door on either side of her shoulders. “Are you sure you want to go?”Gabby nodded.He moved the backs of his fingers across her cheek, down her throat, and over her breasts. Her nipples immediately pebbled under his touch. She closed her eyes and let him explore her body. His hands seemed to be everywhere all at once. She felt his fingertips rubbing against the silk of her shirt, and they were creating the most wonderful feeling over her nipples. He slipped… Read more »
Ella Jade, you little tease! Hehehe *adds another book to the TBR pile* Thanks for sharing!
Thanks for this opportunity: This is from my best selling-Auld Lang Sigh – Free this weekend on Amazon Kindle. “Nice view,” Ella commented looking out over the city and then back to his straining erection. “No complaints here.” He grabbed her and spun her to face the double windows. He kissed a line down her back as he reached around her to place her hands on the glass. She made a needy sound as he wiggled a thigh between her legs to widen her stance. Bending slightly forward, she waited in anticipation as he slid a long finger along her… Read more »
Ella and Lee sound like they know how to ring in the New Year! Thank you for sharing and dropping by. I wish you many, many downloads this weekend!
My sample is from my newest release, Bound by the Mist. As she pulled his head down toward hers, her eyes only open halfway, the sensation of skin against skin wrung a sigh from her. At first, the kiss was tentative. Soon it deepened, lips opening and yielding to the other. First hers. Then his. Lost in sensation, she never wanted to wake from it. The rasp of his tongue inside her mouth melted her body into molten honey. He drew her lower lip between his teeth and delivered gentle nibbles before bathing the slight sting away with his mouth.… Read more »
http://www.amazon.com/Bound-Mist-Mists-Eria-ebook/dp/B0071EY6BW/ref=ntt_at_ep_dpt_3
LOL!! Oh Lisa – that was precious. I loved it. Sooo close, then AHHH! Bound By The Mist – We'll all remember that title. Thanks for sharing your tease!
Here's an excerpt from my first self-published novella, Teach Me, Master. Vince is in the process of convincing Triss to play with him with a bit of phone sex. Triss knew it was him before she picked up the phone. “Hello?” “You started our game without me, pet.” Vince’s rebuke whispered against her ear. “I didn’t.” Triss denied, then recalled the scene she’d been writing. “I saw you, Treats. You were flushed, just like you get before you climax.” The flare of his lighter cut through the fog beginning to form. Through the half-closed curtains of her bedroom window, she… Read more »
Qwillia, that is one…hot…scene. My mind can certainly race from this point and fill in the blanks. Great job of creating a mental picture. Thank you for stopping by. I hope you'll be here next with more.
This is from my latest release, Spell Struck Courtney escorted the realtor to the door, turning the lock the instant it slammed shut. “You really like this place, don’t you?” “Yeah, I want it bad.” “As bad as you want me.” She reached for the front of Alex’s jeans, pulling him in for a kiss. “I’ve never had my very own place before,” he answered when they came up for air, “and this condo is amazing.” Courtney pulled the sweatshirt over her head.” As amazing as these?” Alex cupped her breasts gently running his thumb over the ring in her… Read more »
Kitchen sex…is always fun. Thanks for sharing your excerpt.
This is an excerpt from BLIND HER WITH BLISS, the first book in my sexy romantic suspense series available from Amazon http://www.amazon.com/dp/B004W9BX7Y and B&N: “Does it ever get tiresome watching it?” Julie asked, daring to dip her toe in the waters of seduction. “What?” Good, her question threw him off-kilter. “You know. The people and what they’re doing? You see the two men and that woman over there?” Julie leaned to the side so Demon could see around her as she pointed to a shadowed corner of the bar below. “I thought they were dancing, but there’s definitely something more… Read more »
Nina: Your scene builds such curiosity of who they are, why they watch, and what will happen next. Great job! I hope you share more next time.
Thanks Sheri for letting us post here. Wow, what a lot of steamy stuff. My TBR pile just keeps growing and growing. 🙂 Here's an excerpt from my sci-fi romance STAR CRASH which I just re-released as an ebook.http://www.amazon.com/Star-Crash-Chronicles-ebook/dp/B007T2J9T0 Cora glanced at the walls then turned her wary gaze back to him. "That doesn't change anything. I still don't want you." "I think you lie. Let me touch you." Cora's feet refused to move as the man moved closer. She fought to keep her eyes from focusing on his maleness. She didn't remember Alexander's male equipment being so large, so… Read more »
Great scene – hot action. Thank YOU for coming by, Elysa!
Thanks for doing this, Sheri! There are some great excerpts here so far! I'd like to share from my latest release Remind Me, available from Ellora's Cave http://www.jasminejade.com/p-10005-remind-me.aspx. He moved his hand up farther, stopping just shy of her pussy. Despite the warmth of the sun, she shivered. Something much hotter than the sun was building inside her and she had a pretty good idea of where Pete’s game would lead. After all, he had mentioned fucking in the middle of the main shipping channel. She just hadn’t thought he was serious.“Don’t worry,” he said. “I know exactly what I’m… Read more »
Karenna – I agree. There's some face-fanning scenes here alright! And yours is one of them. Boat sex in the open. The thought brings a smile to my face.
First time visiting. Been a reading a lot of great scenes. My scene is from my contemporary romance – Circles Interlocked. It's available on Amazon KDP. http://www.amazon.com/dp/B005S8LI46 He brushed her cheek. "You wanted to make last night some perfect romantic movie scene, but you were too tired and too tense to enjoy it.""I wanted everything to be perfect for you.""And I want everything to be perfect for both of us." He held out his hand waiting for the glass.Puzzled, Julie handed it to him. He reached in, pulled out an ice cube then placed the glass on the counter. Sucking… Read more »
Wow. Just wow. I'm adding more books to my TBR pile than I could possibly read – lol. I hope you stop by again!
Great excerpts, everyone! Here's a sample from my bdsm romance novella, VALENTINE SUBMISSION – free this weekend on Amazon. As she descended the stairs, a wonderful aroma reached her. She found Jack in the kitchen, fully dressedand pulling an egg casserole out of the oven. The coffee was already made. A basket of steaming biscuits and afresh fruit salad sat on the table. Damn. He’d gone all out.Fucks like a beast and cooks like a champ. Be still my heart.“Good morning, sleepyhead. I was about to wake you up.” He placed the casserole on the table andcrossed the kitchen to… Read more »
*applause* I know I just downloaded my FREE copy! Excellent! Thank you for stopping by. Feel FREE to do so anytime.
Lots of incredible scenes. Thought I'd add one from my current WIP – Capri's Fate. . Something red caught my attention. I turned my head and watched the bustier slip off the bed.Hmph. Must have missed. I picked it up and dropped it on the duvet then turned to get to my pajama top. The mirror's reflection arrested my gaze as again the rubicund, satin teaser slid over the edge of the bed and tumbled to the floor.What the…?I glanced down at the crimson pile. "Are you trying to tell me to put you on? Oh crap, now I'm talking… Read more »
Daryl – is this a paranormal with a ghost? A spirit? What?? Oh, I want to read more…nicely done!
Cathleen Ross Her Prisoner
http://www.amazon.com/Her-Prisoner-Forbidden-Fantasy-ebook/dp/B007FQEFB2/
"Take me, Samia. I dare you."
Despite her instinct that he wasn’t as helpless as he appeared, she leapt onto the dais and straddled him.
His breath quickened with each rise and fall of his broad chest. His gaze roved over her body, focusing between her legs. “You have the prettiest woman parts I’ve ever seen. I want to taste you.”
“That is forbidden.”
“Scared you’ll like it? Honey, I’ll have you writhing over me.”
It's forbidden, huh? We always want what we can't have! Thank you for sharing with us.
*tssss* That's the sound of hot! From "Enslaved By Starlight," my first science fiction romance in the SFR anthology HOTTER ON THE EDGE. http://www.amazon.com/Hotter-On-The-Edge-ebook/dp/B00757WOT6/ Transformed by empathic crystals into the perfect paramour, Benedetta Galil is the last treasure of her fading world. When raiders attack-seeking to corrupt the crystals and conquer all of charted space-she gives herself as a prize to the one man in the universe who values freedom over power. Mercenary sheership Captain Corso Deynah left oppression behind him on a burning planet and has no use for a sex slave, even one as seductive as Benedetta. But… Read more »
Nice excerpt, Jessa. You chose your excerpt well, 'cause now I want to read more! Thanks so much for coming by.
Hello, This sample is from "Fairy Tail" available through Amazon.com http://www.amazon.com/Fairy-Tail-ebook/dp/B007TVY5N6/ref=sr_1_2?s=digital-text&ie=UTF8&qid=1334949831&sr=1-2 I turned to find someone lounging on my couch!My body instantly tensed and I automatically reached for the Magnum, never letting my gaze wander from the intruder. If I wasn’t mistaken, the person on my couch was a woman.I couldn’t see the face hidden in shadow, however, I could see a knockout body that was close to six feet tall, and endowed with enough curves to require hazard traffic signs. The intruder’s body was barely covered by the flimsy excuse she was wearing for clothing. That kinda gave my… Read more »
Hi Andrew – ooh la la. This looks like a fun read. Thanks for sharing and stopping by!!
From DEADLY OFFERINGS, available on Amazon in ebook or print format. She listened as he checked each room upstairs. She watched him as he came down the stairs, placing his gun in the back of his jeans. He had an odd gleam in his eyes as he stared at her. “All clear, right?” He didn’t answer. Instead he backed her against the door and kissed her with such intensity it made her heart hammer against her ribs as explosive currents surged through her. She should be pushing against his chest to stop him, but she was pulling him closer so… Read more »
Thanks for coming by and sharing your excerpt. It sure is getting HOT in here!
From A Facebook Affair by Tara Chevrestt. Available on Amazon, Nook, Breathless Press, AllRomanceEbooks, Smashwords, 1Place for Romance, and Bookstrand. He attempted to lay her on the bed, but she jumped back up again, wiggling out of his grasp. She turned on him and shoved his torso, causing him to fall back instead, his legs dangling off the bed. She could be aggressive as well. She began to slowly peel off her remaining clothing as though performing a striptease. Realizing what she was doing, Brandon smiled smugly and placed his hands behind his head, his manhood throbbing in full view.… Read more »
I like humor in my books, and you didn't disappoint. Thanks for sharing, Tara!
From THE SURRENDER OF LACY MORGAN by Suzanne Ferrell available now at Ellora's Cave Publishing http://www.jasminejade.com/p-9070-the-surrender-of-lacy-morgan.aspx Now was the time to show her he was in control and she was at his mercy. “Strip.” She blinked. “Pardon me?” “You heard me. Take off your clothes.” He stepped back, then pulled the rickety straight-backed chair up against the wall. A glint from inside the carpetbag on the bed caught his eye. He strode over and pulled the Colt out of her bag. He slipped it into the pocket of his duster, then sat in front of the only exit. “Now strip.… Read more »
I like westerns, and I like this! Thank you for giving us a teaser of your work. I hope you'll join in again with more!
OMG! These are HOT! My book doesn't come out until October so I don't have links or anything to post until then. For now I'm going to enjoy reading everyone else's! Nice job, all!
Hi Jenn! You can post WIPs too if you want. I'm glad you stopped by. Your book is coming out soon, and I can hardly wait!
This is from Clockwork Captive by Anh Leod, exclusively on Amazon: He noted faint marks striping the insides of her thighs.“You’ve been whipped, and often. Is Mrs. Teagarden a harsh mistress?”“My patrons enjoy such things,” she said, her mouth pulling to one side.“Really? I’ve found it is the men who enjoy being beaten. All those brutal schoolmasters from our youths, I imagine.”Her eyes sharpened for a moment as if waiting for him to continue, but he couldn’t make polite conversation when he was staring at the treasure between her legs.“A certain class of men enjoys aggression,” she said. “They like… Read more »
Dark. Mysterious. Whatever is he up to? Why do they meet? Nice excerpt that totally leaves me hanging.
This is from "The Pearl Witch" an erotic paranormal novel available at Amazon, Smashwords, ARe, and other fine outlets. Sipping at the wine again, Tarin savored the taste in her mouth, holding it there so she got the full effect. When she swallowed, she pulled his face down to her and kissed Chris deeply. Yes, the rising ambergris flavor mixed in with the wine. It tasted like something thick, earthy, old. She had no idea what ambergris actually tasted like. She just knew it was an ingredient in old perfumes, some kind of whale by-product, but it sounded exotic and… Read more »
TheaH – thank you for playing along on Friday Flames. A glowing hand? Sounds interesting – wonder what else it does…
Thanks for this opportunity Sheri. Here is a small sample of Her Wanted Wolf from Secret Cravings Publishing. Renee Michaelshttp://store.secretcravingspublishing.com/index.php?main_page=book_info&cPath=4&products_id=285 And now you’ve got me more than thinking. You have me wanting.” He caught her bottom lip between his teeth, nipped it, and eased back to study her.Sabine sighed. Her body softened with expectancy of what was coming. He ran his lips along her jaw and slipped a hand between the lapels of her robe to fondle, tease, and arouse. His hands and mouth on her always heated her blood, making her heart beat at the speed of a jackrabbit.Needing… Read more »
Such a tease! Thanks for sharing your excerpt!
Wow! Hot excerpts! Thanks for allowing us to post here, Sheri. 🙂My excerpt is from Zakia and the Cowboy, Book 1 in my Thunder Creek Ranch series. “I can’t wait another minute.” The next she knew, they were both naked, lying entwined on the blankets. Making glorious, abandoned love in the moonlight turned out to be an aphrodisiac in itself. It was like nothing she’d ever experienced before and hoped she’d experience again, and soon. It felt like the power of the entire universe was behind her as she straddled him and rode, pushing down and lifting up, his powerful… Read more »
Zakia and the Cowboy is available at:
http://www.evernightpublishing.com/zakia-and-the-cowboy-by-lorraine-nelson/
Amazon, All Romance Ebooks, and Bookstrand.
For more info on titles available, visit my website at: http://lorrainenelson.weebly.com
Hi Lorraine! Glad to have you and that delicious excerpt here. Stop by anytime!
Well! These excerpts above?Have pulled the level of heat up tp blazing high. lol whew…So, I'm bringing Beast heat…lol This was one of my very first erotic scenes from Beasts~The Eyes Of ConstanceBreaking the breathless sensual plundering of her mouth, he flipped her around, moving her up against the dresser.Their extraordinary rippling reflections were there in the mirror. Constance panted hard and it was as if a living flame leapt beneath her skin. Jack lifted her hips and bent her over, the mirror above the dresser casting his forceful sensuous movements. He eased two fingers into her and she gasped… Read more »
I know this scene (and love it). You can bring the Beast out to play anytime, Leanore. He's always welcome here!! Hot-cha-cha…
Fabulous excerpts from everyone! I've got more books added to my TBR list.
Lea Ellen {night owl in IL}
You and me both, Lea Ellen. Why go anywhere else to find a book to read? Just come here before you buy!!
This is a steamy sample from "Immortal Relations" by G. Ogan (Gary had recently been changed to join the guardian vampires by his two vampire mates, Maggie and Evy. They've just learned a new mind-meld technique allowing shared sexual experiences. This sample is from the middle of one of a number of intimate sharings: "It was at this point that I felt another tongue, caressing, licking and sucking my nipples. All I could do to respond to Evy was to gently stroke her clitoris with my fingers. With all three minds now linked, I really wasn't sure who was doing… Read more »
Importal Relations – nice title. Thanks for sharing!
The excerpt below is from my BDSM romance THE UNDERSTUDY, available from Total-E-Bound (http://www.total-e-bound.com/product.asp?P_ID=1175). Warning – bondage, discipline and anal impalement! Lisabet Sarai (http://www.lisabetsarai.com) ================================ He dragged the vanity stool over to the bed and sat beside me. “How are you, little one? Are the bonds too tight?” I shook my head, still too embarrassed to speak. “How do you feel?” His tone of voice made it clear that he expected a reply. “Helpless,” I said finally. “And horny.” “Good. That’s how you’re supposed to feel.” He trailed his fingers across my bare buttocks, tracing little spirals. My pussy spasmed,… Read more »
A little BDSM anyone? Like your last line, btw. Thanks for sharing!