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Some of
the hottest selling romance books feature a scene of scorching love. The
words burning your page (or eReader), and set your heart to pounding.
the hottest selling romance books feature a scene of scorching love. The
words burning your page (or eReader), and set your heart to pounding.
Today, I want you to share your Smoking Hot scene, the one
that sends the reader…up in
flames.
Keep it short, meaning don’t post the whole
chapter! Just the drool-worthy highlights.
To start it off, here’s an unedited
portion from my upcoming release.
REMEDY MAKER
The top of his belt met her fingers.
The male shifted his stance but didn’t move to stop her
traveling hand. “Yeah? Go on.”
traveling hand. “Yeah? Go on.”
As instructed she went on, caressing her fingers lower.
“There’s a move to change the guards, so to speak.”
“There’s a move to change the guards, so to speak.”
The tip of his semi-erect penis leaped in his pants when her
fingers made contact with the head. His breath blew in a hard huff and she
jumped on the submissive reaction. Pennelope smiled, smelling the faint citrus
scent of his cologne. This meeting was easier than she thought, she figured he’d
put up more of a fight. But she was an ancient female Troll, and the males…they’re all the same.
fingers made contact with the head. His breath blew in a hard huff and she
jumped on the submissive reaction. Pennelope smiled, smelling the faint citrus
scent of his cologne. This meeting was easier than she thought, she figured he’d
put up more of a fight. But she was an ancient female Troll, and the males…they’re all the same.
Leaning in, she pressed her breasts against his chest and
filled her hand with the fullness inside his trouser. Slow strokes up and down.
filled her hand with the fullness inside his trouser. Slow strokes up and down.
Her lips whispered against his ear. “We’re going to be
good together, you and I. A great team.” His length grew, hardened with
her words, and her excitement increased with his. “I can hardly wait to get
started.”
good together, you and I. A great team.” His length grew, hardened with
her words, and her excitement increased with his. “I can hardly wait to get
started.”
And it just gets HOTTER
from there! As always, I welcome each comment and look forward to
your posts!
from there! As always, I welcome each comment and look forward to
your posts!
Oh, a female troll! That was unexpected. Yep, definitely some hot going on between these two. From The Treasure Hunter's Lady: He laid next to her on his side, splaying one hand against her stomach, propping himself up on the other elbow. He lowered his face to hers, kissed her gently at first, his lips soft against her mouth. She tasted the salt of his skin and lifted his hand to cup her breast. Her nipple hardened as the pad of his thumb traced a lazy path around her dusky areola. Her tongue ran the length of his lower lip… Read more »
Allison – Wow! Thank you for your contribution. The first one of the day 🙂 Your last sentence…nice! A bright hot sun – I like that.
Breeana grabbed his shirt and pulled him down. Mel laughed at her impatience as he positioned himself between her legs. He rubbed the head of his shaft against her soft folds, enjoying the silky heat. The sight of her glistening sex had him trembling with anticipation. In one smooth, swift stroke, he entered her, burying himself to the hilt. He roared with pleasure as her wet heat closed around him. His release was a stroke away so he stopped, trying to hold it off. She worked her hands under his shirt and clawed at his back, raking her nails down… Read more »
What I love about your writing, Brendan, is I can feel the playful love between Mel and Breeana. If anyone wants to read more of Love's Prophecy, it's available on Amazon. Mel bites in all the right places. Thanks for sharing your scene!
Sheri, love, love LOVE your scene. I was so excited to see this is from your new WIP. AHHHHHH.
*winces*… This is still from Remedy Maker. My new characters are getting worked up, but they're not there yet. I better write faster–I'm running out of material to post! lol Glad you liked that scene though. 🙂
I'm so busy with editing two books, but I just can't miss out on my usual Friday 'Playdate'! This time, I give you the first hot scene in Nowhere, Arizona. Maddy just got out of the lightning pool. This is the most decadent 'vocal seduction' in my memory as an erotic writer:“Like I want to use my mouth and devour your delicious-looking skin from head to toe?” An inviting vibration filled his voice, and Madeline experienced a lustful spasm. His searing-hot mouth descended on her neck, like a fiery brand on her skin. Her body pulsed. “I want to taste… Read more »
Holy, "bleepin, BLEEEP!" That was scorching!
Off to take a cold shower!
Leanore Elliot! Is Nowhere, Arizona available for purchase? WOW! Now if that didn't crank the heat in my mystic blog, I don't know what will. You have a wonderful way of writing. I can see why you make the top 10 in Amazon!!
Thank you for posting that. Whew…
Sizzling scene. Keep them coming.
Agree with Maggie!
Sheri punched the ten digit code into the front door’s security pad and carried the bags of chips, dips and other food they were going to need for the normal Friday night party later on. Setting the bags in the kitchen she unpacked and sorted out the items. The floor shook and she giggled. The boys were playing again. There was another thump she recognized as a body landing hard on the mats in Greg’s workout room. It was a good thing that both men were tougher than the average person. Walking out to the patio she checked the drink… Read more »
Hi Starfox! I'm so happy to *see* you here! I hope you'll let us know where this snippet is from and if it's available to buy. You always have such interesting storylines. Not the everyday read, that's for sure 🙂
Just to introduce Starfox Howl to everyone, he (yes, he's a HE) just returned from I don't know how many years of service in Afghanistan. How he wrote his novels while wearing a flak jacket and helmet… check him out at Amazon. Starfox Howl.
Okay, I read the ones above and must go to…Take a shower. You Ladies are writing Hot and indecent. Shame on you! Chuckle.
Leanore…if you ever get a chance to read Starfox Howls books, you might like them. Like your imagination, he thinks of stories no one else does. SciFi and romantic.
I know this is WAY longer than it should be but it is a one time deal and was written specifically for Friday Flames per Sheri Fredricks instructions. I had to post in 6 parts so bear with me. I hope everyone enjoys their erotica with a little twist of humor and darkness. Romance Robert Sadler style! Inner Flame Part 1 Galen had just gotten back into writing and was having some moderate success. He had somehow managed to fall in with a group of female erotica writers, a few of which he was becoming really fond of. One of… Read more »
I'm right there with ya, Galen.
Moving onto part 2.
Grinning like an idiot here. To say I love this so far would be an understatement. I totally understand being a mosquito-kabob…
Part 2 “I have been looking for a human male to take as my mate but your breed is often cold and bland inside. You on the other hand have a hidden fire inside you that tastes like the most wonderful aphrodisiac in the universe. I know you wish to bring the Flame Thrower to your writing. You wish to scorch your readers’ souls with the depth of your lust-filled words. I am going to release your inner flame, Galen, and in return you will give me your seed.”Galen knew only two things for sure in that moment: This had… Read more »
Did you plan to hook a pause there? LOL Excellent! Holy infurno, Mr. Q! I'm thinking short story or free read on your website. Which I hope you'll leave for those who are participating and those just perusing these scenes.
Robert Sadler – this is good!!!
Part 3 It took him a moment to get up the courage to speak again. “I said suck it not tease me, do what your told!” Cytheria slid her lips to the base of his shaft gagging slightly when he hit the back of her throat. The sensation nearly made him cum right on the spot. “Do it again, go as deep as you can!” Cytheria followed her orders with enthusiasm taking him deep into her throat over and over again moaning in pleasure and making little growling noises while he bucked and thrashed. He had lost track of how… Read more »
You hit upon an important point! Excellent! Is everybody taking note of this? You seriously have a mind for SciFi/Romance. You, Starfox Howl, and Leanore. If anyone is looking for summertime reads in that genre – well, there you go.
Hehehe, now on to Part Four…
Part 4 A dozen times or more he took those pink lips in his and made her feel what he felt. When he pulled back again she had a look of desire on her alien face. “Is this how you really look?”“It is as close as possible while maintaining this form. Do I frighten you?” She tried to flicker back to one of his previous fantasies but was pleasantly surprised when she couldn’t. He wanted her in this form. It was something that had never happened before.“I think you are beautiful just the way you are and I want to… Read more »
*swipes forehead with an ice cube*
HOT HOT HOT HOT You, my dear contributor, are BURNING the Friday Flame today.
Part 5 . He flattened out his tongue to make sure he was covering as much surface as he could and then began to slowly move back and forth making sure to touch her most sensitive spot from every possible angle. When her breath quickened and her thighs began to squeeze together he curled his tongue underneath the very bottom edge and began to flick back and forth quickly. He would occasionally switch to the top and push his tongue against her hood before curling underneath once again making her mumble in a language not meant for human ears. Before… Read more »
And? And? I must keep reading!! (ps: like the way her skin and shape keep changing.)
Part 6 He put his left hand on her shoulder and pulled her back into him, watching as a large Polynesian tattoo spread out magically beneath his hand. With one last thrust they came together in a rippling wave of pleasure that sucked the energy from both of them. As he collapsed on her back he gently pushed aside the auburn hair and kissed her neck. “I love you, sweetheart.” She turned and lifted her head so that he could lay a tender kiss on her cheek.“I love you too, baby, now go to sleep.”“Ok, hon, I’ll try.” He laid… Read more »
OMG!!! That was sexy and erotic as hell and so beautiful at the same time.
Thank you very much Brenda!
That was really a great story! Should publish it. I love that you had your wife in it clearly with the tattoo. You both must be so in love and nice to share with the rest of the world!
It makes me want to Google: Polynesian Tattoos. What a beautiful ending to a steamy hot romance. Never naughty, five-star sensual.
I loved it. *and the crowd goes wild!!*
Happily, I give you five stars. From the bottom of my heart, thank you for creating a one-of-a-kind short for my Friday Flames. I'm beyond honored.
HOT!
Rob –
That was mighty excellent! Very well written sci-fi erotic romance. I have to agree with the others about publishing this (by itself or as part of a collection of other short stories).
Lea Ellen {night owl in IL}
Ooooohhhhh….good ones, ladies! From Cooper's Redemption…. His fingers worked their own magic. Slowly, circling nipples with brushes so light they seemed nearly nonexistent, he coaxed her breasts to an aching need. Moving his body so he lay under her, he guided one lace-covered breast to his mouth. His demanding lips and tongue, searching, tasting through sheer material, nearly drove her mad. She straddled his belly, bent at the waist, her hair covering her face. His hands went to her ribcage, slowly sinking lower until they rested on her hips. Where they remained. She needed more.A boiling, building pressure deep within… Read more »
D'Ann – thank you for sharing this scene! I kept thinking to myself, "Will she? Will she?" Just enough of a tease to keep the reader on edge. Great job!
Another great round of Friday Flames! I'm going to turn on the ceiling fan and open a few windows….lol! I just have a little snippet from Some Like it in Handcuffs that just released on March 23rd (was that a shameless plug? lol) This is a little scene with Sunny and Jud 🙂 She looped her fingers into his waistband andtugged his jeans and boxers down. The shudder ofhis skin followed her hands as she worked themdown his legs. In no hurry, she thrilled at how hertouch affected him, letting her fingers worship thehardened muscles of his thigh. Sunny’s eyes… Read more »
Plug your book, Christine! And do it without shame. That's what it's all about. The tone of your writing shows what a lighthearted and humorous story you have.
I believe you're currently on a book tour, blogging like mad and interviewed by everyone under the sun. Congratulations on your release! And thanks for sharing SOME LIKE IT IN HANDCUFFS.
You have arrived, Rob Sadler….You have created a Sexy Literary Light, my dear.We all stand blinded and in awe. Bravo…
My goodness! Now THAT was a ringing endorsement! lol. Thank you very much. Assuming you aren't teasing me of course 🙂
Leanore: Thank you for voicing the opinion of the over 600 viewers today.
Rob truly worked a marvel.
Hot, hot, hot. Great scenes with lots of spice!
hot scene Sheri – and others – going to get a cold drink.
Holy Guacamole, Batman. Them is steamin' hot! Very much enjoyed. Here's mine from The Pirate Princess Positioning above, he slowly entered her, savoring the pleasure and embracing the torturous bliss. Years of celibacy unwound and a masculine power coursed through him.He thrust hard, embedding hilt deep. She arched and cried out. Grabbing her hands, he laced their fingers. With their gaze unbroken, they stared and connected in a sacred communion. Their bodies merged in ecstasy that rolled over them like the maelstrom of high tide against the rocks, crashing and retreating in harmony. A pinnacle of pleasure built inside him.… Read more »
Years of celibacy, huh? Yowza. That right there peaked my interest – and your scene locked it in. Sounds like there's a long history between these two. I hope this is available for purchase.
Thanks for adding to my TBR 🙂
All kinds of hot going on here! Whew! I'll post next week–got to wait for the steam to clear off my monitor. LOL Great job, ladies and gent!
I've opened the freezer door to cool off twice now…
Ok going to add my WiP "Demon Mine" It needs to be edited of course. Cause it is a WiP. I hope you all like. Her breath caught as she waited in anticipation for him to touch her like she craved. She didn’t say a word; she knew that if she tested him, he would follow through on not letting her come. She didn’t want that, she wanted him bad. A soft mewl of a moan slipped from her lips as she felt the head of his cock, stroke along her dripping entrance, her hands tightened on the headboard as… Read more »
Hey Nikki – You've really got something here. I'm looking forward to more flaming scenes from this WIP. You're on a roll. BICHOK, my friend. Thanks for sharing.
Thanks Sheri…going to be working on it..some more 🙂 I appreciate it. Was fun to put up.
Hot stuff!
Really enjoyed ALL of the posts from the authors! Great job! Friday Flames are burning hot.
Lea Ellen {night owl in IL}